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WALK SLOWLY ON THE SAND by =agosbeatle:iconagosbeatle:



The breeze with its fragance of salt
floods your eyelashes,
makes your hair fly
and makes your eyes shine more than the sea.

Your voice is like the singing of the mermaids
and your footsteps the road to eternity.
To have you close
the only condition is to breathe.

Think of you is like the garden of Eden
to chafe your skin is the door to glory
one glance of you,
stops vanity.

Memories tie us up to our past,
as sweet as the old wine,
that makes us remember,
fortune days that were not much.

My feet feel the speck of sand,
my heart feels yours when crackling.
There wont be any fallen leaves in winter,
which your bonfire will not use.

Ask for anything and you will have it,
ask for eternal life and you will hate it,
ask for a second of love,
and with me, it will be enough.
©2008-2009 =agosbeatle
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Translation of CAMINA DESPACIO SOBRE LA ARENA [link]
Remember that in Spanish sounds terrificly better
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Wow that's a really great poem :clap:

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“I'm not afraid of death because I don't belive in it. It's just getting out of one car, and into another.”
John Lennon
i love how it sounded so spontaneous XD

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~~what you don't know doesn't hurt.

:evillaugh::psychotic::psychotic:
:D

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I belong to the Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club. Wanna join?

:peace: John & Paul & George & Ringo
thank you!! I believe it sounds better in Spanish though

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I belong to the Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club. Wanna join?

:peace: John & Paul & George & Ringo
Unfortunately I don't speak Spanish :( but it's a beautiful poem in English too :D

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“I'm not afraid of death because I don't belive in it. It's just getting out of one car, and into another.”
John Lennon
XD

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~~what you don't know doesn't hurt.

:evillaugh::psychotic::psychotic:
thank you!

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I belong to the Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club. Wanna join?

:peace: John & Paul & George & Ringo
But in any language, the message is the same, and it is beautiful. What is especially brilliant is how well you conveyed that message in two languages--how does it feel to be two steps closer to spreading love around the world? :D

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+(DaMang ~ Nonchalant)+

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:D oh, thank you! The kind words of yours sound really sincere :hug:

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I belong to the Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club. Wanna join?

:peace: John & Paul & George & Ringo

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